Minor suggestions for draft-metzger-esp-00.txt

[jpp@markv.com]

Here are similar changes to those I proposed for -ah-00.

j'

diff draft-metzger-esp-00.txt draft-metzger-esp-00.txt.ala.jpp
45,46c45,46
<    This document describes a privacy mechanism for IPv4, encapsulating
<    transport headers within an opaque envelope.
---
>    This document describes a privacy mechanism for IPv4 analogous to
>    encapsulating transport headers within an opaque envelope.
[english]
267c267
<       SAID values in the range 0xFFFFFFF1 through 0xFFFFFFFF are
---
>       SAID values in the range 0x00000001 through 0x0000000F are
[better to keep special values all together in one block.  0x0 is
special too. (It indicates no SAID yet established, right?)]
308c308,309
<    If cleartext datagram If a SAID is received which is not valid for a
---
>    If a cleartext datagram arrives from a Source after a SAID has
>    been established, or a SAID is received which is not valid for a
310d310
< 
[typo, i bet]

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