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draft-ietf-rfc2401bis-01: editorial nits




(1) On page 14: "There are two nominal databases in this model ..." 
                "A third database, the Peer Authorization Database ..."

     Wouldn't it be better to say that there are THREE nominal databases in the model?
     (Unless you think that the PAD is somehow not part of the model).

(2) On page 33: "Note: The source address that appears in the encapsulating
    tunnel header MUST be the one that was negotiated during the SA establishment
    process."
 
    Should this be the destination address, not the source address? (Dst addr + SPI
    will uniquely identify the SA unless it's multicast)

Cheers!
Mike