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Subject: RE: ikev2-11 nit
Date: Sun, 4 Jan 2004 20:26:27 -0800
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From: "Charlie Kaufman" <charliek@microsoft.com>
To: "Jari Arkko" <jari.arkko@kolumbus.fi>, <ipsec@lists.tislabs.com>
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Sounds fair. I'll do it unless someone objects.

	--Charlie

-----Original Message-----
From: owner-ipsec@lists.tislabs.com
[mailto:owner-ipsec@lists.tislabs.com] On Behalf Of Jari Arkko
Sent: Thursday, December 18, 2003 2:39 PM
To: ipsec@lists.tislabs.com
Subject: ikev2-11 nit

A nit in IKEv2 draft 11: Section 2.16 says this about
EAP methods:

    "... protocols expected to be used most commonly
     are fully documented here and in section 3.16."

I disagree about the "fully" part. Section 3.16 has a total
of 19 lines of text about EAP methods. In contrast, RFC 2284bis
spends about 10 pages to describe the same thing. Recommended fix:
remove the word "fully".

--Jari